Re-writing squared

I'm still re-writing. In fact, I'm almost at the same stage I was last month.

The re-writing I was doing stalled when I began to realise that I hadn't divorced myself from the previous edition entirely and I was making some of the same mistakes again. So, now I'm working on the new, new draft and it's coming out much better. The main character is slicker and, I think, more interesting. It's just a case now, I hope, of plugging away. Luckily, I have next week off to give it some TLC.